Wading into the kiddie pool

Well, alright.

I suppose there’s no good reason to keep all my genius to myself (hahaha), so I will be slowly releasing what I have of the first edit, and once I’m caught up with what I’m currently writing, I’ll post it up as I edit.

It should be quick, since I don’t have too many new scenes to write, so I think April is a good deadline.

But without further ado…

Chapter 1 Scene 1

Chapter 1 Scene 2